Correct English?

by Me
(Australia)

These are written in bad English... By an Asian? I really wish people would take the time to construct sentences properly and not write stuff like "You always try to make others pleased." and "You may involve with others with undue emotional depth." and "You often involve with music, art and sculptures to express your individuality." What??

This is NOT western English. We can pick it straight away that it's not written in a fluid fashion. It makes the quality of a site like this tacky.